I'm afraid indepth commentary is... not going to happen, I'm too caught up. But I will try a little. Happy to see ANYTHING!
Firstly I love your way of showcasing 'normal life' on Gallifrey. The sense of place and continuity and the everyday. The culture, the community. I'm glad! I wanted to make it clear that this was normal for Roda; she didn't give up something she hated (or lose it), it was everything.
Secondly it's TERRIBLY exciting to have future!m!Roda show up and run rings around everything I hadn't originally intended it but he's a shit and I love it.
Whatever is happening in the future. It WILL all make sense, but not for some time. ;)
It's two plots running simultaneously, except younger!Roda will have to come by it the long way round. River Songing it! <3
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Date: 2020-07-18 08:02 pm (UTC)Happy to see ANYTHING!
Firstly I love your way of showcasing 'normal life' on Gallifrey. The sense of place and continuity and the everyday. The culture, the community.
I'm glad! I wanted to make it clear that this was normal for Roda; she didn't give up something she hated (or lose it), it was everything.
Secondly it's TERRIBLY exciting to have future!m!Roda show up and run rings around everything
I hadn't originally intended it but he's a shit and I love it.
Whatever is happening in the future.
It WILL all make sense, but not for some time. ;)
It's two plots running simultaneously, except younger!Roda will have to come by it the long way round.
River Songing it! <3