I'm glad you think so, because it was a chapter I was VERY unsure about. But I sort of wanted to show... hmm. That she was a teenager? That she wasn't wise? Or like... she's not OUR Roda yet. She's still growing up and becoming who she is. That all makes sense, and it works very well. She is exploring and the 'teenage' thing is a perfect allusion. Right down to the sneaking out and trying a new hobby. <3
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Date: 2020-08-30 06:54 am (UTC)That all makes sense, and it works very well. She is exploring and the 'teenage' thing is a perfect allusion. Right down to the sneaking out and trying a new hobby. <3